Short story

This is a short story JPL and I wrote today in school. There were 5 things given that should be included in the text: stale ashtray, river, kitchen sink, flock of gees and gas stove.
Now see what we wrote:

THE SILENCE OF THE GEES

It was a cold day. I was just smoking a cigarette when he came. He was new here, nobody knew his name, until the accident.
Everything went so fast and it's terrifying that everything became normal so fast. My stale ashtray is still on the table in front of the farm house, the river still flows. Just the flock of gees is missing.
He wanted to put them on a gas stove, when they were still alive. He pressed their heads into the kitchen sink and even tried to throw them off the roof. Everywhere were feathers painted by blood, everywhere.
But now he's gone and with him the gees.

Written by JPL and JPS in the english lesson.
Give us a comment for that please. :)